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Is this OK:
I didn't wanna post this, but I couldn't stop laughing at myself, so I decided to share with you guys... This is the moment when I realized that I was in a family fun zone and that in front of me were a bunch kids and their parents waiting to take pictures with the cartoon characters.
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Nearly all of this is correct. "bunch kids" should be "bunch of kids". "wanna" feels inappropriate.
- Nearly all of this is correct.
- "bunch kids" should be "bunch of kids".
- "wanna" feels inappropriate.
- Write "want to" instead.
- "wanna" is acceptable in limited contexts, such as when imparting a very casual feel to transcribed dialogue, or when you knowingly want to make a point of being very casual in something that you are saying yourself.
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Nearly all of this is correct.
"bunch kids" should be "bunch of kids".
"wanna" feels inappropriate. Write "want to" instead. "wanna" is acceptable in limited contexts, such as when imparting a very casual feel to transcribed dialogue, or when you knowingly want to make a point of being very casual in something that you are saying yourself. Otherwise avoid it, and the same with "gon
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