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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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This extraordinary production method allows preserving a high content of proteins in the Greek yogurt – 9%, and lower content of carbohydrates in comparison with other yoghurts.

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This extraordinary production method preserves a high protein content in the Greek yogurt—9%—and lower carbohydrate content than in other yogurts.

  • This extraordinary production method preserves a high protein content in the Greek yogurt—9%—and lower carbohydrate content than in other yogurts.
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This extraordinary production method preserves a high protein content in the Greek yogurt—9%—and lower carbohydrate content than in other yogurts.
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I'm truly grateful!

Coul you please taka a look at ths sentence as well?

For several centuries unique characteristics of the Greek yogurt has been ensured by its special and largely unchanged manufacturing method.

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For several centuries the unique characteristics of the Greek yogurt have been preserved by its special manufacturing method.

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