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Balboa1 Posted 8 years ago
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Is this Okay: If gluttony is a sin... I’m going to hell anyway, might as well enjoy it while it lasts.
  

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balboa1 Is this Okay Not exactly. I think you want this: If gluttony is a sin, I’m going to **** anyway, so I might as well enjoy it while it lasts. But even so, it's not clear what "it" is.

  • balboa1 Is this Okay Not exactly.
  • I think you want this: If gluttony is a sin, I’m going to **** anyway, so I might as well enjoy it while it lasts.
  • But even so, it's not clear what "it" is.
  • "life", perhaps?
  • Or "eating"?
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balboa1Is this Okay

Not exactly. I think you want this:

If gluttony is a sin, I’m going to **** anyway, so I might as well enjoy it while it lasts.

But even so, it's not clear what "it" is. "life", perhaps? Or "eating"?

CJ

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