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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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This is March's shipment, we did not advise Janet to ship this before CNY holiday and did not request customer to earlier ship, but keep it on the first week of March
  

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Hi, This is March's shipment, we did not advise Janet to ship this before CNY holiday and did not request customer to earlier ship, but keep it on the first week of March This is March's shipment. We did not advise Janet to ship this before the CNY holiday and did not request the customer to earlier ship, but keep it on the first week of March I don't understand the part in bold. You need to try to say it in another way.

  • Hi, This is March's shipment, we did not advise Janet to ship this before CNY holiday and did not request customer to earlier ship, but keep it on the first week of March This is March's shipment.
  • We did not advise Janet to ship this before the CNY holiday and did not request the customer to earlier ship, but keep it on the first week of March I don't understand the part in bold.
  • You need to try to say it in another way.
  • Clive
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Hi,

This is March's shipment, we did not advise Janet to ship this before CNY holiday and did not request customer to earlier ship, but keep it on the first week of March

This is March's shipment. We did not advise Janet to ship this before the CNY holiday and did not request the customer to earlier ship, but keep it on the first week of March
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CliveHi,

This is March's shipment, we did not advise Janet to ship this before CNY holiday and did not request customer to earlier ship, but keep it on the first week of March

This is March's shipment. We did not advise Janet to ship this before the CNY holiday and did not request the customer to earlier ship, but keep
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Hi,

This is my rewrite, please review it and correct me again, thank you : This is March's shipment. We did not advise Janet to ship this before the CNY holidays and did not request the customer ship this in early. Therefore, it will be kept shipment on March.

I still don't understand kept shipment on March. My guess is that you mean 'It
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CliveHi,

I still don't understand kept shipment on March. My guess is that you mean 'It will be kept until the March shipment.'

Clive

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