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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

short sentence

The cargo will be delivered to your warehouse today, please arrange them to air the priority flight
  

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The cargo will be delivered to your warehouse today . Please arrange priority flight for it .

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  • The cargo will be delivered to your warehouse today .
  • Please arrange priority flight for it .
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The cargo will be delivered to your warehouse today. Please arrange priority flight for it.
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AnonymousThe cargo will be delivered to your warehouse today. Please arrange to airfreight them on a priority/early flight
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What's the reason for changing the , to . ?
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The comma creates a comma-splice-- a grammar error of two independent clauses without a coordinating conjunction, a semicolon or a period.
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