Short self portrayal

Please have a look at the short self portrayal below with 'presentation' of my diploma thesis.
Thank yoou in advance!
Best regards,

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Dear colleagues,

I am working with __ since ___ in the division __ as a diploma candidate.

A short self- portrayal as follows:

My name is __ and I am currently studying Business Management at the University __ with focus on marketing. This includes marketing strategies (i.a. environmental, competitor and customer analysis), portfolio and scenario planning, strategic management, communication policy and sales.

In my diploma thesis I want to start at the point of interception between the theoretical scientific knowledge and the practically orientated sales. The aim of my thesis is to map out a strategy for the division _ in ___ respectively __.

I got a very warm welcome within my first two weeks at ___ and I want to take the chance to express my gratitude and appreciation to all the colleagues I have already met.

I am looking forward to a good and fruitful collaboration.

If you have any further questions or other concerns please do not hesitate to contact me.

Best Regards,

___