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Bethwell Posted 18 years ago
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Short scientific paper, reviewer insists there are grammatical errors, kindly check for me

01. Brahman steer crosses were allowed to graze continuously or rotationally at a high stocking rate 02br
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002 00Grazing system and stocking rate are management tools used to influence livestock grazing behaviour, aimed at improving range condition and optimizing livestock performance.02br
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003.Grazing 01i00schemes, based on the rotation principle02i00 were initiated in 00communal areas with little success 02br
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004 00Little success of the grazing schemes might be linked to the high stocking rate of communal areas , hence a need to investigate 01a01i00this factor02i02a00.02br
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005 00Animal weight data were analyzed using the General Linear Model (GLM) procedures for the analysis of variance using SPSS (SPSS, 1999) at 0.05 level of significance. 0-
  

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