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Kyurkchiyski Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing

Short Personal Info

Hello to everyone,

I am creating a portfolio and I have to write some information about myself.
So, here is the text:

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Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Ivan Kyurkchiyski and this is my personal and professional biography in short.

I was born on March 6th, 1985, in Burgas, Bulgaria.
I Graduated from High School of Civil Engineering, Architecture and Geodesy “Hristo Botev” in Sofia, Bulgaria in 2003.The same year I was admitted to University of Architecture, Civil Engineering and Geodesy (UACEG) in Sofia, Bulgaria, and graduated from the Department of History and Theory of Architecture in 2009. The topic of my thesis was developing of a culture tourist information system, and its implementation in Bulgaria.

I started working for ET Delfina as an architectural draughtsman in September 2003.
During my working for ET Delfina I was involved mostly in developing of small residential building projects.
Three years later I started working for AS Iliev EOOD as an architect. The projects I worked on were of residential buildings as well as of public buildings.
I paused my working for AS Iliev EOOD for one and a half years during my final exams.
In May 2009 I started working for Planning EOOD (former AS Iliev EOOD) and I have been working for the company for five and a half years. As a part of the team of Planning EOOD I have worked on wide variety of projects such as residential buildings, public buildings, shopping centres, multifunctional complexes and military building units, for Bulgaria and abroad.

On the following pages you can see some of the projects I was involved in – I hope you will enjoy them.

Ivan Kyurkchiyski

architect

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I will appreciate any comments – is there many mistakes, is it properly structured, etc.

Many thanks in advance
  

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Here are some suggestions: Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Ivan Kyurkchiyski and this is a short my personal and professional biography in short. I was born on March 6th, 1985, in Burgas, Bulgaria. The same year I was admitted to the University of Architecture, Civil Engineering and Geodesy (UACEG) in Sofia, Bulgaria , where I graduated from the Department of History and Theory of Architecture in 2009.

  • Here are some suggestions: Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Ivan Kyurkchiyski and this is a short my personal and professional biography in short.
  • I was born on March 6th, 1985, in Burgas, Bulgaria.
  • The same year I was admitted to the University of Architecture, Civil Engineering and Geodesy (UACEG) in Sofia, Bulgaria , where I graduated from the Department of History and Theory of Architecture in 2009.
  • The topic of my thesis was developing and implementing of a culture and tourist information system , and its implementation in Bulgaria.
  • I started working for ET Delfina as an architectural draughtsman in September 2003.
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Here are some suggestions:

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Ivan Kyurkchiyski and this is a short my personal and professional biography in short.

I was born on March 6th, 1985, in Burgas, Bulgaria.
I graduated from the High School of Civil Engineering, Architecture and Geodesy “Hristo Botev” in Sofia, Bulgaria in 2003.The same y
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Thank you very much AlpheccaStars!

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