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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
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short passage for year 2 students
1 b 00 This passage is meant for 01 u 00 year 2 students 02 u 00 . Please edit if for me. Any comments to improve the passage are welcome. 02 b 02 br
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00 One day, Tony went to a shopping centre with his parents. It was very crowded there. 02 br
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00 Tony saw a toy displayed 01 b 00 02 b 00 in the window 00 of one of the shops. He liked it so much that he quickly walked to the shop. After looking at the toy for some time, he turned around to find that his parents were missing. His parents did not know that their son had 00 00 wandered off by himself. Tony panicked as he could not find his parents. He was soon crying. 02 br
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00 A young man saw him crying, and asked him what had happened? “I can’t find my parents,” he explained, tears flowing down his cheeks. 01 b 00 02 b 00 “Don’t worry. I’ll help you.” 02 br
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00 The young man told him to wait outside the shop with him as he believed his parents would be looking for him. About five minutes later, Tony saw his parents. He was relieved. His mother said, “You made Father and me look high and low for you. We were so worried.” 02 br
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00 Tony apologised to his mother and promised her that this would never happen again. 02 br
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00 He has learnt his lesson. Nowadays, he stays close to his parents whenever he goes shopping with them. 0-
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00 One day, Tony went to a shopping centre with his parents. It was very crowded there. 02 br
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00 Tony saw a toy displayed 01 b 00 02 b 00 in the window 00 of one of the shops. He liked it so much that he quickly walked to the shop. After looking at the toy for some time, he turned around to find that his parents were missing. His parents did not know that their son had 00 00 wandered off by himself. Tony panicked as he could not find his parents. He was soon crying. 02 br
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00 A young man saw him crying, and asked him what had happened? “I can’t find my parents,” he explained, tears flowing down his cheeks. 01 b 00 02 b 00 “Don’t worry. I’ll help you.” 02 br
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00 The young man told him to wait outside the shop with him as he believed his parents would be looking for him. About five minutes later, Tony saw his parents. He was relieved. His mother said, “You made Father and me look high and low for you. We were so worried.” 02 br
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00 Tony apologised to his mother and promised her that this would never happen again. 02 br
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00 He has learnt his lesson. Nowadays, he stays close to his parents whenever he goes shopping with them. 0-
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1 b 00 This passage is meant for 01 u 00 year 2 students 02 u 00 . Please edit if for me. 02 b 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 I have no idea what age or stage year 2 represents where you are.
- 1 b 00 This passage is meant for 01 u 00 year 2 students 02 u 00 .
- Please edit if for me.
- 02 b 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 I have no idea what age or stage year 2 represents where you are.
- In the UK, Year 2 pupils are 6 years old.
- 02 font 02 br 02 br 00 One day, Tony went to a shopping centre with his parents.
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1 b 00 This passage is meant for 01 u 00 year 2 students 02 u 00 . Please edit if for me. Any comments to improve the passage are welcome. 02 b 02 br
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01 font 00 I have no idea what age or stage year 2 represents where you are. In the UK, Year 2 pupils are 6 years old. I would imagine you don't mean them! 02 font 0
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01 font 00 I have no idea what age or stage year 2 represents where you are. In the UK, Year 2 pupils are 6 years old. I would imagine you don't mean them! 02 font 0
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0 Lil' Ruby Rose 02 br
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00 Our Year 2 students are 7 years old. So age-wise, the children are similar to those in the UK. 02 br
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00 Many thanks for editing the passage, and the constructive comments. 02 br
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00 A great effort indeed! 0-
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00 Our Year 2 students are 7 years old. So age-wise, the children are similar to those in the UK. 02 br
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00 Many thanks for editing the passage, and the constructive comments. 02 br
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00 A great effort indeed! 0-
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