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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
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1 b 00 The passage is meant for year 2 students. Please edit it for me. Any suggestions to improve the passage are welcome. Thanks in advance. 02 b 02 br
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00 Last Friday morning, Isaac was sleeping soundly. The alarm clock rang. He switched off the alarm and told himself that he would wake up five minutes later. When he finally woke up, he looked at the clock. It was 7 o’clock. He would be late for school. 02 br
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00 He quickly brushed his teeth and changed into his school uniform and, with his school bag slung over his shoulder, rushed to the bus stop. He had no time for breakfast. Soon he saw the bus he had to take moving towards the bus stop. He ran quickly, but he missed the bus. So he decided to run to school, as his school is not far away. He was running for a short while when it started to rain. Poor Isaac! He was drenched all over. When he reached the school, he was scolded by his form teacher for being late. 02 br
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00 Isaac had learnt a lesson. He decided that he would not go to bed late any more. 02 br
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00 Last Friday morning, Isaac was sleeping soundly. The alarm clock rang. He switched off the alarm and told himself that he would wake up five minutes later. When he finally woke up, he looked at the clock. It was 7 o’clock. He would be late for school. 02 br
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00 He quickly brushed his teeth and changed into his school uniform and, with his school bag slung over his shoulder, rushed to the bus stop. He had no time for breakfast. Soon he saw the bus he had to take moving towards the bus stop. He ran quickly, but he missed the bus. So he decided to run to school, as his school is not far away. He was running for a short while when it started to rain. Poor Isaac! He was drenched all over. When he reached the school, he was scolded by his form teacher for being late. 02 br
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00 Isaac had learnt a lesson. He decided that he would not go to bed late any more. 02 br
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0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Last Friday morning, Isaac was sleeping soundly. The alarm clock rang. He switched off the alarm and told himself that he would wake up five minutes later.
- 0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Last Friday morning, Isaac was sleeping soundly.
- The alarm clock rang.
- He switched off the alarm and told himself that he would wake up five minutes later.
- When he finally woke up, he looked at the clock.
- It was 7 o’clock.
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01 font 00 Last Friday morning, Isaac was sleeping soundly. The alarm clock rang. He switched off the alarm and told himself that he would wake up five minutes later. When he finally woke up, he looked at the clock. It was 7 o’clock. He would be late for school. 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 Last Friday morning, Isaac was sleeping soundly. The alarm clock rang. He switched off the alarm and told himself that he would wake up five minutes later. When he finally woke up, he looked at the clock. It was 7 o’clock. He would be late for school. 02 font 02 br
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0 Thanks, Clive, for editing the passage. 02 br
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