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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

short passage

0Please edit this passage meant for 01u00year 2 students02u00. Thanks in advance. 02br
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00Last Monday, Grandmother was ill. She had to be hospitalised. My parents, my sister and I visited her the next day. When we reached the hospital, she was resting on her bed. We brought her some fruit and biscuits. She was very happy to see us. 02br
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00We sat at the side of her bed and chatted with her. My sister and I cracked some jokes to cheer her up. We had to leave when a nurse told us that the visiting hours were over. My sister and I hugged Grandmother and promised that we would visit her the next day. 02br
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00 00I hope that Grandmother will get well soon. 02br
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05002br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive010id1

  • 05002br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive010id1
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0Hi,02br
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00Seems fine to me.05002br
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00Best wishes, Clive010id1
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0 Thanks, Clive. 0-

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