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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
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01 b 00 This passage is for 1st-year students. Could someone edit this passage for me. Thank you in advance. 02 b 02 br
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00 To be fit, we have to exercise. We can stroll, jog or swim. Besides exercise, we have to eat healthy food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. We should eat less oily food as it is not good for our health. 02 br
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00 My father jogs while my mother walks briskly for exercise. As for me, I often swim to remain fit. 00 02 br
00 We must also go to bed early so that we have enough sleep. If we do not have enough sleep, we will not be able to do our work properly if we are not fresh in the day. 00 0-
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01 b 00 This passage is for 1st-year students. Could someone edit this passage for me. Thank you in advance. 02 b 02 br
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00 To be fit, we have to exercise. We can stroll, jog or swim. Besides exercise, we have to eat healthy food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. We should eat less oily food as it is not good for our health. 02 br
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00 My father jogs while my mother walks briskly for exercise. As for me, I often swim to remain fit. 00 02 br
00 We must also go to bed early so that we have enough sleep. If we do not have enough sleep, we will not be able to do our work properly if we are not fresh in the day. 00 0-
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0 My suggestion: 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 If you want to become fit, you have to exercise daily. You can go jog, swim, or even just take a walk for regular exercise. It is also important to change your eating habits to include as many fruits and vegetables as possible, in your daily diet.
- 0 My suggestion: 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 If you want to become fit, you have to exercise daily.
- You can go jog, swim, or even just take a walk for regular exercise.
- It is also important to change your eating habits to include as many fruits and vegetables as possible, in your daily diet.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Personally, I prefer to go for a refreshing swim for my daily exercise.
- My mother prefers to take a walk with her friends, while my father will get up very early in the morning to go jogging.
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00 If you want to become fit, you have to exercise daily. You can go jog, swim, or even just take a walk for regular exercise. It is also important to change your eating habits to include as many fruits and vegetables as possible, in your daily diet. Cutting back on fatty and unhealthy foods can make a huge difference in ensur
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00 If you want to become fit, you have to exercise daily. You can go jog, swim, or even just take a walk for regular exercise. It is also important to change your eating habits to include as many fruits and vegetables as possible, in your daily diet. Cutting back on fatty and unhealthy foods can make a huge difference in ensur
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