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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
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0 Could someone go through and edit this short passage for me. Many thanks. 02 br
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00 Two boys, Patrick and Simon, were talking about their fathers. 02 br
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00 Patrick started by saying that his father could remain underwater for five minutes. Simon replied, “But my father went underwater yesterday and has not come out of the water yet.” 02 br
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00 Patrick was impressed and told Simon, “That’s means your father is a greater swimmer than my father.” “No,” Simon said, “That’s means my father has left this world 0-
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00 Two boys, Patrick and Simon, were talking about their fathers. 02 br
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00 Patrick started by saying that his father could remain underwater for five minutes. Simon replied, “But my father went underwater yesterday and has not come out of the water yet.” 02 br
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00 Patrick was impressed and told Simon, “That’s means your father is a greater swimmer than my father.” “No,” Simon said, “That’s means my father has left this world 0-
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0 All fine until the last sentence 02 br
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00 “That means your father is a greater swimmer than my father.” 02 br
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00 “No,” Simon said, “That means my father has left this world." 0-
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00 “That means your father is a greater swimmer than my father.” 02 br
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00 “No,” Simon said, “That means my father has left this world." 0-
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01 cite 10 Nona The Brit 12 cite 10 All fine until the last sentence 12 br10 Hi Nona 02 br
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10 “That means your father is a greater swimmer than my father.” 12 br
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10 “No,” Simon said, “That means my father has left this world." 12 br
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