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Na358_gs Posted 15 years ago
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Have you had and personal experiences of animals manipulating humans?
Yes, I do have a personal experience of my pet manipulation. I pet 3 iguanas, and when they want to come out of the cages. They will use their their little hands to bang on the glass door of the cages, and when I pretend not to notice them. They knock more furiously and constantly. After sometime i will get so irritated by the action, that i let them out early.
Yes, I do have a personal experience of my pet manipulation. I pet 3 iguanas, and when they want to come out of the cages. They will use their their little hands to bang on the glass door of the cages, and when I pretend not to notice them. They knock more furiously and constantly. After sometime i will get so irritated by the action, that i let them out early.
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Hello, na – and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and post your revised paragraph here: Yes, I do have a personal experience of my pet manipulation .
- Hello, na – and welcome to English Forums.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please try to fix them and post your revised paragraph here: Yes, I do have a personal experience of my pet manipulation .
- I pet 3 iguanas, and when they want to come out of the cag es.
- Th ey will use their their little hands to bang on the glass door of the cages, and when I pretend not to notice the m.
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Hello, na – and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and post your revised paragraph here:
Yes, I do have a personal experience of my pet manipulation. I pet 3 iguanas, and when they want to come out of the cages. They will use their their little hands to bang on the glass door of the cages, and w
Yes, I do have a personal experience of my pet manipulation. I pet 3 iguanas, and when they want to come out of the cages. They will use their their little hands to bang on the glass door of the cages, and w
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Yes, I do have a personal manipulation experience from my own pet. I petted 3 iguanas, and when they want to come out of the cages, they will use their their little hands to bang on the glass door of the cages, and when I pretend not to notice them, they knock more furiously and constantly. After sometime I will get so irritated by the action, that I let them out early.
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You do not need to repeat the question, na.
I have three iguanas, and when they want to come out of their cages, they use their little forefeet to bang on the glass door, and when I pretend not to notice them, they knock more furiously and constantly. After some time, I get so irritated by the action that I let them out soon.
I have three iguanas, and when they want to come out of their cages, they use their little forefeet to bang on the glass door, and when I pretend not to notice them, they knock more furiously and constantly. After some time, I get so irritated by the action that I let them out soon.
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