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PreciousJones Posted 13 years ago
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We have a toy that we would like to convert into a graphic 3-D design for the computer. I have attached pictures of the toy for you to have a better visual understanding of what it looks like. Any questions, input, thoughts are highly welcomed. Thank you for your time and we look forward to hearing from you.

Please proofread for me. Thank you!
  

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My thoughts on your paragraph:-
"graphic 3-D design for the computer" This is not my field, so I don't know if this is the correct terminology or not.
"better vi
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Is highly welcomed incorrect?
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PreciousJones We have a toy that we would like to convert into a graphic 3-D design for the computer.
Please tell me that if you only change a toy? You mean a kind of toys?
You can try this one: We are going to convert a kind of toys (a toy) into the graphic 3-D design for computer.
PreciousJones I have attach
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Can someone please confirm these answers? Thank you!
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"Warmly welcomed" is excellent. "Highly welcomed" is not.
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