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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
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Hey Shannie and Jenny,

How about dinner and a movie on Thursday night? I'm inviting my friend Timothy, he's from Australia and a really cool chap! I think we should get some authentic Indian food, since after all we are in India. Then after dinner, let's all go to the Taj Mahal Mall in downtown India, and catch a flick! Anyway, it's unfortunate that I'm leaving so soon, because there's so much to do here and I've meet some really great people.

Please proofread for me. Thank you so much!

Sorry I've made a few corrections!
  

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Hey Shannie and Jenny, How about dinner and a movie on Thursday night? I'm inviting my friend Timothy. H e's from Australia and a really cool chap.

  • Hey Shannie and Jenny, How about dinner and a movie on Thursday night?
  • I'm inviting my friend Timothy.
  • H e's from Australia and a really cool chap.
  • I think we should get some authentic Indian food, since after all we are in India.
  • ) and catch a flick.
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Hey Shannie and Jenny,

How about dinner and a movie on Thursday night? I'm inviting my friend Timothy. He's from Australia and a really cool chap. I think we should get some authentic Indian food, since after all we are in India. Then after dinner, let's all go to the Taj Mahal mall in downtown India (???) and catch a flick. Anyway, it's unfortunate that I'm leaving so

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