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Chnaus Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Short paragraph, help please.

Just wondering if anyone can help on this short paragraph? Thanks in advance.

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Secondly, no services exist in many suburbs around the CBD. This forces people living in those areas have not other practical choices but driving. As a result, it makes big adverse impact on the road. More and more congestions and traffic jams happen on increasing-number roads. In worst scenario, the whole transportation system breaks down.

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Hi, Secondly, no services exist in many suburbs around the CBD. This forces people living in those areas have not other practical choices but driving. As a result, it makes big adverse impact on the road.

  • Hi, Secondly, no services exist in many suburbs around the CBD.
  • This forces people living in those areas have not other practical choices but driving.
  • As a result, it makes big adverse impact on the road.
  • More and more congestions and traffic jams happen on increasing-number roads.
  • In worst scenario, the whole transportation system breaks down.
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Hi,
Secondly, no services exist in many suburbs around the CBD. This forces people living in those areas have not other practical choices but driving. As a result, it makes big adverse impact on the road. More and more congestions and traffic jams happen on increasing-number roads. In worst scenario, the whole transportation system breaks down.

Secondly, no services exist in many sub
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Thank you very much for helping on this.

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