Short paragraph
Is this okay:
A typical Sunday for me is inactivity and chill at home, but I’ve been out since this morning. Thank god I’m meeting my friend near where I was at during the day, otherwise I’d be dead by now, lol.
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You say it's Sunday. You mentioned being out since morning. But you don't say that it is now night.
- You say it's Sunday.
- You mentioned being out since morning.
- But you don't say that it is now night.
- You suddenly mention "where I was at during the day", and the reader thinks, "What happened?
- " It might help if you clarify the amount of time that has passed, maybe even saying what you did during that time.
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You say it's Sunday. You mentioned being out since morning. But you don't say that it is now night. You suddenly mention "where I was at during the day", and the reader thinks, "What happened? It was morning and now it's night?" It might help if you clarify the amount of time that has passed, maybe even saying what you did during that time.
I think you should try again. And don't b
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