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Balboa1 Posted 8 years ago
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Is this OK: Wow, there's so much to see in Bangkok! I don't even know where to begin... I'd suggest to go with a tour group, that's what we did, but make sure to find one that has a good hotel and site seeing package. There's beach resorts that have astonishingly incredible views of the sea with really cool amenities like outdoor pools and basketball courts overlooking the city.

  

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Hi Balboa1, Overall your writing is good. You have produced an interesting summary of your trip to Bangkok, and expressed your feelings well. There are just a couple of things which can be edited: balboa1 I'd suggest to go with a tour group I suggest changing this to, "I'd suggest going with a tour group".

— Elloenglish

  • Hi Balboa1, Overall your writing is good.
  • You have produced an interesting summary of your trip to Bangkok, and expressed your feelings well.
  • There are just a couple of things which can be edited: balboa1 I'd suggest to go with a tour group I suggest changing this to, "I'd suggest going with a tour group".
  • We can use the -ing form of the verb to turn it into a noun/activity.
  • " I hope that helped!
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Hi Balboa1,


Overall your writing is good. You have produced an interesting summary of your trip to Bangkok, and expressed your feelings well. There are just a couple of things which can be edited:

balboa1I'd suggest to go with a tour group

I suggest changing this to, "I'd suggest going with a tour group". We can use the -ing form of

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Wow, there's so much to see in Bangkok! I don't even know where to begin. I'd suggest to going with a tour group. That's what we did. But make sure to find one that

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