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Is this OK: Since I was a kid I've always wanted to be Batman, so when I got to Universal Studios, the first ride I went on was Batman The Ride. On our way back to the hotel someone told me that the world's highest bungy jump was here, and immediately I told my friend that I wanted to do the jump in a Batman Costume. So, my plan was to go to the Batman Store, get the costume, and do the jump, because "I AM BATMAN!" Then I realized the whole process would've taken too long, so we went straight to the tower. The minute I got to the tower I knew this was going to be an experience that I would remember for the rest of my life. Oh man, was I excited! As you can see in the video that I couldn't stop smiling, because I was so psyched.
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Self correct: Since I was a kid I've always wanted to be Batman, so when I got to Universal Studios, the first ride I went on was Batman The Ride. On our way back to the hotel someone told me that the world's highest bungy jump was here, and I immediately told my friend that I wanted to do the jump in a Batman Costume. " Then I realized the whole process would've taken too long, so we went directly to the tower.
- Self correct: Since I was a kid I've always wanted to be Batman, so when I got to Universal Studios, the first ride I went on was Batman The Ride.
- On our way back to the hotel someone told me that the world's highest bungy jump was here, and I immediately told my friend that I wanted to do the jump in a Batman Costume.
- " Then I realized the whole process would've taken too long, so we went directly to the tower.
- The minute I got to the tower I knew that this was going to be an experience that I would remember for the rest of my life.
- Oh man, was I excited!
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Since I was a kid I've always wanted to be Batman, so when I got to Universal Studios, the first ride I went on was Batman The Ride. On our way back to the hotel someone told me that the world's highest bungy jump was here, and I immediately told my friend that I wanted to do the jump in a Batman Costume. So, the plan was to go to the Batman Store, get a costume, and do the
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