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Eslbro Posted 8 years ago
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Is this OK: I’ve always been very independent, I’m pretty sure it started when I was 15 years old that year I joined wilderness camp. That experience toughened me up and also taught me basic survival skills for the woods and in the wild. Ever since when I’m out in Mother Nature, I feel free and calm and relieved from all the troubles in life, they seem to have gone and are nowhere to be found. Sometimes when I’m out there I’ll take a short break to inhale the crisp fresh air into my lungs, to get a quick second of euphoria that’ll make me feel wide awake like if a shot of electricity went into my body and thrushed my eyes lids fully open and charged my pupils with x-ray vision.

  

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eslbro Is this OK: I’ve always been very independent, I’m pretty sure it started when I was 15 years old that year I joined wilderness camp. That experience toughened me up and also taught me basic survival skills for the woods and in the wild. Ever since when I’m out in Mother Nature, I feel free and calm and relieved from all the troubles in life, they seem to have gone and are nowhere to be found.

  • eslbro Is this OK: I’ve always been very independent, I’m pretty sure it started when I was 15 years old that year I joined wilderness camp.
  • That experience toughened me up and also taught me basic survival skills for the woods and in the wild.
  • Ever since when I’m out in Mother Nature, I feel free and calm and relieved from all the troubles in life, they seem to have gone and are nowhere to be found.
  • Sometimes when I’m out there I’ll take a short break to inhale the crisp fresh air into my lungs, to get a quick second of euphoria that’ll make me feel wide awake like if a shot of electricity went into my body and thrushed my eyes lids fully open and charged my pupils with x-ray vision.
  • Self correct: I’ve always been very independent, I think it started when I was 15 years old that year I joined a wilderness camp in Montana.
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eslbro

Is this OK: I’ve always been very independent, I’m pretty sure it started when I was 15 years old that year I joined wilderness camp. That experience toughened me up and also taught me basic survival skills for the woods and in the wild. Ever since when I’m out in Mother Nature, I feel free and calm and relieved from all the troubles in life, they seem to have go

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