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Levis1 Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Please proofread: I'm not a Kobe fan, but one thing I can tell you for sure is that I'm glad to have seen him play live. Kobe's killer instinct is second to none, and his drive and passion to be the best was seen and heard throughout the league. The game I went to he scored 40+ points, making 5/7 three's in a win. What a performance it was and the most incredible thing is that he did it so effortlessly! The game has changed a lot and it feels like the days of the ultra-competitive, spartan warrior mentality has been substituted with 'Lets join up and make an all star super team' trend', but we all got to keep up with the times, right?

  

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