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Levis1 Posted 9 years ago
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Is this OK: When in Rome, do as the Romans do, is the motto, and we did just that by having some authentic Italian food in Florence. The food was superb, and my favorite was the spaghetti carbonara with chopped garlic and herbs. The sliced sirloin steak was also very good. We definitely made the right decision to dine here.
  

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levis1 " When in Rome, do as the Romans do " is the motto, and ... As shown. The rest is good as it stands.

  • levis1 " When in Rome, do as the Romans do " is the motto, and ...
  • As shown.
  • The rest is good as it stands.
  • One question, though: Did you intend the inclusion of "Florence" to be a comic note?
  • I ask because I laughed when I read it.
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levis1"When in Rome, do as the Romans do" is the motto, and ...

As shown. The rest is good as it stands.

One question, though: Did you intend the inclusion of "Florence" to be a comic note? I ask because I laughed when I read it. You start by saying that you did

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