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Levis1 Posted 9 years ago
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Short paragraph

Please check for errors: He won fair and square... so it's time for Americans to grow up and let the political process take its course... in my opinion he's either gonna be made the laughingstock of the 21st century or really do something incredible and make America great again!

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levis1 How's my writing? If you want very casual style, then go ahead and use dots and dashes, but your writing will look more professional without those. And you shouldn't use "gonna".

  • levis1 How's my writing?
  • If you want very casual style, then go ahead and use dots and dashes, but your writing will look more professional without those.
  • And you shouldn't use "gonna".
  • If it were my paragraph to write, I would do it like this: He won fair and square, so it's time for Americans to grow up and let the political process take its course.
  • In my opinion he's either going to be made the laughingstock of the 21st century or really do something incredible and make America great again!
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levis1How's my writing?
If you want very casual style, then go ahead and use dots and dashes, but your writing will look more professional without those. And you shouldn't use "gonna". If it were my paragraph to write, I would do it like this:

He won fair and square, so it's time for Americans to grow up and let the political process take its cou

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