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Bball1 Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

short paragraph

Please proofread: Yes, you do have some responsibility in the way it went, but but even if you were able to fix it, is this really what you want? - to be the fixer, provider, caregiver, etc? It does get tiring. Ask your mother how she feels about providing for her younger brother. And neither he, nor it seems, your girlfriend appreciate the efforts.

Does the last sentence make sense?
  

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bball1 Does the last sentence make sense? It is mispunctuated ( 'neither he n or, it seems, your ') and the S-V agreement is wrong.

— Mister Micawber

  • bball1 Does the last sentence make sense?
  • It is mispunctuated ( 'neither he n or, it seems, your ') and the S-V agreement is wrong.
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bball1Does the last sentence make sense?
It is mispunctuated ('neither he nor, it seems, your') and the S-V agreement is wrong.
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what S - V agreement?
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bball1what is S - V agreement?
A singular subject must have a singular verb, while a plural subject must have a plural verb.
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