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Wonderful Posted 10 years ago
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Is this OK: It's that time of the year again! My itinerary for this spring. Another chance to reflect on the past year, relive the happiness of traveling, and feel the wonderment of revitalization.
  

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How about: feel the wonderment of being revitalized!

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How about: feel the wonderment of being revitalized!
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wonderfulHow about: feel the wonderment of being revitalized!
It doesn't work for me.
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So, is the first example better?
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What about: and to have a chance to be revitalized!
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What about the rest of the sentence: It's that time of the year again! My itinerary for this spring. A time to reflect on the past year, relive the happiness of traveling, and a chance to be revilatized!
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It's that time of the year again! OK

My itinerary for this spring. Fragment

A time to reflect on the past year, relive the happiness of traveling, and a chance to be revitalized! Fragment
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AlpheccaStarsIt's that time of the year again! OKMy itinerary for this spring. FragmentA time to reflect on the past year, relive the happiness of traveling, and a chance to be revitalized! Fragment
corrections: Heres my itinerary for this spring

It's a time to reflect in the past year, etc...

Do these changes make the sentences complete se
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It's that time of the year again!
Here's my itinerary for this spring.
It's a time to reflect on the past year, relive the happiness of traveling, and be revitalized! (The items in the list all need to be infinitives so you have a parallel structure.)
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I don't know what infinitives are.
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