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Bebop Posted 10 years ago
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Lying in bed contemplating on what happened last night... my mind is on a loop repeatedly advising myself, "D it's time to grow the ___ up!" It seems after every incident the cells in my body germinates and I become another year exhausted... Uber does the body good.
  

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Do not abuse the ellipsis. I think 'germinate' is the wrong word choice, but I don't really know what you are getting at. " It seems that after every incident, the cells in my body germinate, and I become another year more exhausted.

  • Do not abuse the ellipsis.
  • I think 'germinate' is the wrong word choice, but I don't really know what you are getting at.
  • " It seems that after every incident, the cells in my body germinate, and I become another year more exhausted.
  • Uber does the body good.
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Do not abuse the ellipsis. I think 'germinate' is the wrong word choice, but I don't really know what you are getting at.

Lying in bed contemplating what happened last night, my mind is in a loop, repeatedly advising me, "It's time to grow the *** up!" It seems that after every incident, the cells in my body germinate, and I become another year more exhausted. Uber does the body good.

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