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Besides my technical passions, I love spending my free time doing sports. In the summer I go climbing and swimming a lot. Two years ago, I have begun diving, what impressed me straightaway. In the winter time, I go skiing or sledding whenever I spare time.
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could you have a look at this paragraph? Do you find any mistakes? Do you have any ideas how to write it in a more exiting way?
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Besides my technical passions, I love spending my free time doing sports. In the summer I go climbing and swimming a lot. Two years ago, I have begun diving, what impressed me straightaway. In the winter time, I go skiing or sledding whenever I spare time.
Thank you
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In addition to my technical interests, I spend my free time in physical activities. In the summer I go climbing, swimming or diving; in the winter, I go skiing or sledding.
- In addition to my technical interests, I spend my free time in physical activities.
- In the summer I go climbing, swimming or diving; in the winter, I go skiing or sledding.
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In addition to my technical interests, I spend my free time in physical activities. In the summer I go climbing, swimming or diving; in the winter, I go skiing or sledding.
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