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Knightofsports Posted 13 years ago
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As you know we're currently in the process of manufacturing our products, and the project should be completed by the end of next week. I've forwarded your email to a few of my investor partners to have them take a look at your friend's company introduction, and to see if they would be interested in future partnerships. I'll get back to you as soon as I return to California as we're having lunch to divvy up the season tickets for next season. However, as you may already know, we're a start-up company, so sponsorship at this point may be a premature, but I can't so for certain. Please ask your friend to have patience as we're confident that we'll be seeking partnerships with athletic and sports related businesses down the road.

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As you know, we are currently in the process of manufacturing our products, which should be completed by the end of next week. I have forwarded your email to a few of my investor partners to have them take a look at your friend's company introduction and to see if they would be interested in future partnerships. I will get back to you as soon as I return to California, as we are having lunch to distrtibute the season tickets for next season.

— Mister Micawber

  • As you know, we are currently in the process of manufacturing our products, which should be completed by the end of next week.
  • I have forwarded your email to a few of my investor partners to have them take a look at your friend's company introduction and to see if they would be interested in future partnerships.
  • I will get back to you as soon as I return to California, as we are having lunch to distrtibute the season tickets for next season.
  • However, as you may already know, we are a start-up company, so sponsorship at this point may be premature.
  • Please ask your friend to have patience, as we are confident that we will be seeking partnerships with athletic- and sports-related businesses in the near future.
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As you know, we are currently in the process of manufacturing our products, which should be completed by the end of next week. I have forwarded your email to a few of my investor partners to have them take a look at your friend's company introduction and to see if they would be interested in future partnerships. I will get back to you as soon as I return to California, as we are having lunch to
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Mister MicawberAs you know, we are currently in the process of manufacturing our products, which should be completed by the end of next week. I have forwarded your email to a few of my investor partners to have them take a look at your friend's company introduction and to see if they would be interested in future partnerships. I will get back to you as soon as I return to
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