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PreciousJones Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Short paragraph

We probably have pretty similar backgrounds, I'm also an African American, lived in all parts of California, currently getting my management training/experience here at CC, then I'm going back home to expand my career.

Please proofread. Should there be a period between the first and second sentence?

Thank you!
  

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PreciousJones Should there be a period between the first and second sentence? Sentences can be separated only by periods, question marks or exclamation marks. We probably have pretty similar background s.

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  • PreciousJones Should there be a period between the first and second sentence?
  • Sentences can be separated only by periods, question marks or exclamation marks.
  • We probably have pretty similar background s.
  • I'm also an African American, have lived in all parts of California , and am currently getting my management training/experience here at C C; then I'm going back home to expand my career.
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PreciousJonesShould there be a period between the first and second sentence?
Sentences can be separated only by periods, question marks or exclamation marks.

We probably have pretty similar backgrounds. I'm also an African American, have lived in all parts of California, and am currently getting my management training/experienc
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Yes, there should always be a period between sentences. Emotion: wink
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Can we do away with 'am' in 'and am currently'?
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haroon rashidCan we do away with 'am' in 'and am currently'?
No, of course not—that is why I had to insert them.
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I wanted to say, "I m also an African American, have lived in all parts of California, and currently getting my management training/experience here at CC; then I'm going back home to expand my career."
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haroon rashidwanted to say, "I m also an African American, have lived in all parts of California, and currently getting my management training/experience here at CC; then I'm going back home to expand my career."
No, don't say that. In the first place, it is structurally wrong, as I have already indicated twice, and in the second place, you are not African Am
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Sorry, I am not an Indian. I am a Pakistani.
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Sorry; I was thinking that the Punjab is in India.
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A large part of Punjab is in Pakistan and the capital of Punjab is Lahore where i live.
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haroon rashidA large part of Punjab is in Pakistan and the capital of Punjab is Lahore where i live.
Aha!
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