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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
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First thing we need to do is get our tickets so be at the theater by 8:15PM. Next thing is for those that want have dinner I was thinking that we can split into groups where people want to eat at. Then will meet right back the theater by 9:30PM and head in together.

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I have underlined some problem areas. Please post your revised paragraph. First thing we need to do is get our tick ets s o be at the theater by 8:15 PM.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please post your revised paragraph.
  • First thing we need to do is get our tick ets s o be at the theater by 8:15 PM.
  • Next thing is for those that want have dinn er I was thinking that we can split into groups where people want to eat at .
  • Then will meet right back the theater by 9:30 PM and head in together.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please post your revised paragraph.

First thing we need to do is get our tickets so be at the theater by 8:15 PM. Next thing is for those that want have dinner I was thinking that we can split into groups where people want to eat at. Then will meet right back the theater by 9:30 PM
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First thing we need to do is get our tickets, so be at the theater by 815PM. Next thing is for those that want to have dinner, I was thinking that we can split into groups, where people want to eat. Then, we'll meet right back at the theater by 930PM and head in together.

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The first thing we need to do is get our tickets, so be at the theater by 8:15 PM. The next thing is that for those that want to have dinner, I was thinking that we can split into groups according to where people want to eat. Then, we'll meet right back at the theater by 9:30 PM and go in together.
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