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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Short paragraph.

Please be so kind and take the time to leave a feedback for me. This is how others would know that I try my best to provide the best customer service possible. I hope you are enjoying your purchase. Thank you very much and look forward to your meeting you again.

Please proofread.

Thanks.
  

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Please take time to leave feedback for me, so that others will know that I try my best to provide the best customer service possible. I hope you are enjoying your purchase. Thank you very much, and I look forward to meeting you again.

  • Please take time to leave feedback for me, so that others will know that I try my best to provide the best customer service possible.
  • I hope you are enjoying your purchase.
  • Thank you very much, and I look forward to meeting you again.
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Please take time to leave feedback for me, so that others will know that I try my best to provide the best customer service possible. I hope you are enjoying your purchase. Thank you very much, and I look forward to meeting you again.
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Mister MicawberPlease take time to leave feedback for me, so that others will know that I try my best to provide the best customer service possible. I hope you are enjoying your purchase. Thank you very much, and I look forward to meeting you again.
Thank you for making it flow more smoothly, but are there any grammatical errors? This way I'll know what sor
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I have fixed the grammatical errors. Please compare the two versions.
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Hi, in my opinion, "please be so kind.." is not courteous.
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Yes, 'please be so kind as to...' often precedes a rather irritable command.

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