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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Short letter to finance officer. Please correct my gramma mistakes

0This is a letter to College financial office.02br
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00This is really important matter. If I don't get financial aid award then I don't have enough money for school. 02br
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00Please review it and correct any mistake! thank you so much!02br
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00Dear. Officer of student financial aid02br
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00My name is ***02br
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00I applied for admission in the 2007 spring semester.02br
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00About 2weeks ago I received papers, which was you has reviewed my FAFSA information and requesting my parents and my 2005 Faderal Tax Return and W2s.02br
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00my question is my mother passed away about 3month ago so my family's financial stuation has been changed,so when I submit Federal tax return and W2s should I write a letter about my situation and attach with them? or do you have specific form that i need to fill out?02br
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00my mother used to make more than half of family income if I don't get financial aid award there is no way I can go to school. please advice me what should I do.02br
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00Thank you for your advice and assistance.0-
  

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0Hello Anon,02br 02br 00I'm sorry about your mother. That's a tough thing to be dealing with while you also get ready to go to school. I expect you will need a copy of the death certificate, so I included that in this letter.

  • 0Hello Anon,02br 02br 00I'm sorry about your mother.
  • That's a tough thing to be dealing with while you also get ready to go to school.
  • I expect you will need a copy of the death certificate, so I included that in this letter.
  • This happens to be a field I'm pretty knowledgeable about, but not your exact situation.
  • I actually recommend that you call the Financial Aid Office rather than writing, and make sure you ask to speak to the DIRECTOR of financial aid, not whatever loan coordinator happens to answer the phone.
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0Hello Anon,02br
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00I'm sorry about your mother. That's a tough thing to be dealing with while you also get ready to go to school. I expect you will need a copy of the death certificate, so I included that in this letter. This happens to be a field I'm pretty knowledgeable about, but not your exact situation. I actually recommend that you call the Financial Aid Office rat
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0Hi. Grammar Geek!Thank you so much for you help.02br
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00Yes, It's not easy to dealing with my mom's death and school thing at the same time.02br
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00I found my Financial Counselor's name and sent an E-mail to him. I think I will wait about 2day for reply then I am planing to visit school Financial Aid office with a copy of my mom's death certificat

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