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Harmonsmith Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Short leave applictaion


hello guys kindly correct it.
Dear Sir,

I got admission in 4 month Web designing course and I have to reach the institute at 7o-clock. Therefore I request you to release me half an hour before off time only for Tuesday and Thursday.

I will be very thankful to you.

Yours obediently

XYZ
  

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Try: Dear Sir, I am enrolled in a four-month web designing course, and I have to reach the institute by 7 PM. Therefore, I request that I be released half an hour earlier every Tuesday and Thursday (from date to date). Thank you.

  • Try: Dear Sir, I am enrolled in a four-month web designing course, and I have to reach the institute by 7 PM.
  • Therefore, I request that I be released half an hour earlier every Tuesday and Thursday (from date to date).
  • Thank you.
  • Yours sincerely, XYZ Chris
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Try:

Dear Sir,

I am enrolled in a four-month web designing course, and I have to reach the institute by 7 PM. Therefore, I request that I be released half an hour earlier every Tuesday and Thursday (from date to date).

Thank you.

Yours sincerely,
XYZ

Chris

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