short introduction to the presentation

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hello teachers!
I've wrote a short introduction for my presentation
Since the subjecct is too vague,'it may contain lots of errors.
Sorry and Thanks in advance!

^{Semiotics is studying the field of meanings in general concepts. In this sense, semiotics in the genre of movie, focuses on how they create the meanings. Also studying semiotics focuses on what ways do they deliver the meanings to audience. Therefore, film semiotics is trying to figure out the standards of watching movie. Also figuring out what the meanings of certain factors are. One of the crucial issues in studying film is concerning how you create scenes. The most important matter in filming a movie is how you create meanings.}
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Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

I don't know why this text has such big letters when I paste it.

Here are quite a few suggested edits. Interesting paragraph.

Clive

Semiotics is studying the field of meaning in general terms. In this sense, semiotics in the genre of movies focuses on how they create meanings. In addition, the study of semiotics focuses on the ways in which movies deliver these meanings to the audience. Therefore, movie semiotics consists of trying to determine the standards (<<< I don't understand 'the standards'. Say it another way) of watching movies, and also trying to determine out what the meanings of certain factors are.(<<< the part in italics is too vague) One of the crucial issues in studying film concerns how scenes are created. However, the fact remains that the most important matter in filming a movie is the creation of meanings.

Ellisa · Answer

Thanks Clive!

I was translating Korean to English so there must be inappropriate words......
Standards- here means criteria of judging good movie like, What was the topic or What techniqe was used in the movie. That kind of thing.

Clive · Answer

i,
OK. Then say,
eg the criteria for judging a good movie

Clive

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