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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Short grammar check, please!

Purpose of the event:
Raising prestige of professional cleaning
Raising efficiency of cleaning
Strengthening positions of federation un company in the field of cleaning
Organizing professional celebration for cleaners first time in the German history

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Hi I'm not sure what the third one means. It might be good to use bullet points ... Purpose of the event Raising the prestige of professional cleaning Raising the efficiency of cleaning Organizing a professional celebration for cleaners for the first time in German history Dave

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  • Hi I'm not sure what the third one means.
  • It might be good to use bullet points ...
  • Purpose of the event Raising the prestige of professional cleaning Raising the efficiency of cleaning Organizing a professional celebration for cleaners for the first time in German history Dave
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I'm not sure what the third one means. It might be good to use bullet points ...

Purpose of the event
  • Raising the prestige of professional cleaning
  • Raising the efficiency of cleaning
  • Organizing a professional celebration for cleaners for the first time in German history

Dave
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