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Nikitus Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Short Essay, 70 words.
Dear Forum Members, could you help me with the grammar of this short essay?
Jim gets off the bus and start walking. He sees a viewing point.
Jim walks to the viewing point and sits in a bench. He watches the sea.
Jim takes out two action figures from his backpack. One of the figures is a young Sue and the other figure is Jim in his youth.
Jim "sits" the two figures together in the bench close to him. Jim watches the see.
Thanks for your help and time!
Jim gets off the bus and start walking. He sees a viewing point.
Jim walks to the viewing point and sits in a bench. He watches the sea.
Jim takes out two action figures from his backpack. One of the figures is a young Sue and the other figure is Jim in his youth.
Jim "sits" the two figures together in the bench close to him. Jim watches the see.
Thanks for your help and time!
Top answer
Jim gets off the bus and start walking. He sees a viewing point. He walks there, sits down on a bench and watches the sea.
- Jim gets off the bus and start walking.
- He sees a viewing point.
- He walks there, sits down on a bench and watches the sea.
- Then he takes two action figures out of his backpack.
- One of the figures is a young Sue and the other is a young Jim.
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Jim gets off the bus and start walking. He sees a viewing point. He walks there, sits down on a bench and watches the sea. Then he takes two action figures out of his backpack. One of the figures is a young Sue and the other is a young Jim. He sets the two figures together on the bench next to him, and then he watches the sea again.
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