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Nikitus Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Short essay, 36 words
Dear forum members:
I want to ask about this essay:
When you and my dad lived in the house of my grandparents, did my dad must quickly swallow half of the cereal, even if my dad wasn‘t hungry because otherwise you would eat all the cereal?
Thanks for your time
I want to ask about this essay:
When you and my dad lived in the house of my grandparents, did my dad must quickly swallow half of the cereal, even if my dad wasn‘t hungry because otherwise you would eat all the cereal?
Thanks for your time
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An essay is a much more substantial and structured body of writing. Your question is too rambling and awkward. I suggest eg When you and my dad lived in my grandparents' house, did he quickly eat half of the cereal every morning even if he wasn‘t hungry?
- An essay is a much more substantial and structured body of writing.
- Your question is too rambling and awkward.
- I suggest eg When you and my dad lived in my grandparents' house, did he quickly eat half of the cereal every morning even if he wasn‘t hungry?
- Was it because otherwise you would eat it all?
- Clive
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An essay is a much more substantial and structured body of writing.
Your question is too rambling and awkward.
I suggest eg When you and my dad lived in my grandparents' house, did he quickly eat half of the cereal every morning even if he wasn‘t hungry? Was it because oth
Your question is too rambling and awkward.
I suggest eg When you and my dad lived in my grandparents' house, did he quickly eat half of the cereal every morning even if he wasn‘t hungry? Was it because oth
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