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Lucus Ong Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Short Essay

Good everning everyone!

I write an essay today. However, I don't know wherether I do have make mistakes.

Could anyone correct it for me thanks?

Great Thanks in Advance.

I am very impatient. I always hope to learn the most things at the shortest time. Therefore, I tend to make these four mistakes while reading.

1. I always focus on too many aspects of knowledge at the same time.

2. I always change to another aspect of knowledge before I really master the one.

3. I always neglect the process of thinking what I have learnt. I don’t think of how to practice what I have learnt from authors and revise the authors’ perspectives into the way that is suitable for me to practice.

4. I don’t have a system to supervise my practicing of new knowledge.

Four strategies

1. I can only focus on only about 2 aspects of knowledge at the same time.

2. I can not change into another aspect of knowledge before I really master one.

3. I have to spend more time on thinking what I have learnt. I need to think of how to practice what I have learnt from authors. I also have to revise the authors’ perspectives into the way that is suitable for me to practice.

4. I need to prepare a file. Write down my plans of practicing the knowledge I have mastered and supervise my practicing of new knowledge every night.
  

Top answer

It does not seem to be an essay, but a series of numbered points. Would you please put it into paragraph format? I can tell you immediately, however, that it is very poor style to begin every sentence with 'I'.

  • It does not seem to be an essay, but a series of numbered points.
  • Would you please put it into paragraph format?
  • I can tell you immediately, however, that it is very poor style to begin every sentence with 'I'.
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It does not seem to be an essay, but a series of numbered points. Would you please put it into paragraph format? I can tell you immediately, however, that it is very poor style to begin every sentence with 'I'.
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Thank you!

I always have a question in mind.

We always say that we need to write in a way that is well-organized, in order to make things clear.

I think that point form is clearer than paragraph form.

However,I saw a lot writers tend to write things in paragragh rather than in a point format.

My teacher also don't allow me to write in point form in my
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I think that point form is clearer than paragraph form. However,I saw a lot writers tend to write things in paragragh rather than in a point format. My teacher also don't allow me to write in point form in my term paper. Can you tell me the reason?-- Please get your head on straight. 'Point form' is not used in any kind of essay, report, composition, or letter. You may use it for tak

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