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Perfect Stranger Posted 9 years ago
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[short email] could you have a look at it?
Dear Users,
Could you tell me what mistakes I've made in this email?
Hello Jimmy,
Thanks for your message. The Shield has stopped working completely. I can't use it at all anymore. How am I going to be refunded? Is it possible to claim a whole refund? I need to buy another VPN service as it is crucial for me to have access to a stable VPN.
Looking forward to your reply,
Best,
XYZ
Could you tell me what mistakes I've made in this email?
Hello Jimmy,
Thanks for your message. The Shield has stopped working completely. I can't use it at all anymore. How am I going to be refunded? Is it possible to claim a whole refund? I need to buy another VPN service as it is crucial for me to have access to a stable VPN.
Looking forward to your reply,
Best,
XYZ
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It looks fine to me.
- It looks fine to me.
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