short e-mail to a manager

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hi, i have to send an e mail to get informations on a job. i just want you to check my english, also i don't know how to finish the letter, i haven't writen a formal letter for years!
thanks.

Dear X,

my name is C.T. and i am a student in foreign languages in Paris. I am looking for an internship to conclude my 3 year degree and I would be very interested in being an intern in the (name of the company) french departement. I send a mail to Mr Y who gave me your e-mail, and told me i should contact you. I would like to get the informations in order to apply for an internship.

BarbaraPA · Accepted Answer

Hi, I have to send an e-mail to get informations on a job. I just want you to check my English. Also I don't know how to finish the letter; I haven't written a formal letter in years!
thanks.

Dear X,

My name is C.T. and I am a student in foreign languages in Paris. I am looking for an internship to conclude my three-year degree and I would be very interested in being an intern in the (name of the company) French departement. I e-mailed Mr Y, who gave me your e-mail and advised me to contact you. I would greatly appreciate it if you could please send me any information you have regarding applying for an internship.

[Don't forget to include your contact information]

Is there a reason you don't use capital letters? They are a necessary part of English.

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