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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Short Courses

Hello! Could you please proofread the letter below? How would you rewrite it in a more natural way?

Dear Sir,

I have just completed my CELTA course in .... and want to do my DELTA in ......., hopefully. But before that, I also want to do some other courses in your website which I’ve found very exciting, to be honest. So I am writing to enquire about the short courses. For example I am especially interested in (i) Teaching Performing Arts in English and (ii) Using Technology courses. Could you please give me more information about the content of both of the courses? Whom are these courses for? Are there any minimum requirements to apply for them? What are the practical value of these courses? What do generally people do after they receive these certificates? Are we given a certificate or an official paper that states we completed these courses? If yes, are these certificates recognised by Cambridge University?

I am looking forward to your response.

Yours faithfully,
......
  

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Dear Sir, I have just completed the CELTA course in Istanbul, Turkey and want to do the DELTA course in Athens, Greece , hopefully . But before that, I also want to do some other on-line courses on your website which I’ve found very exciting , to be honest . So I am writing to enquire about the short courses.

  • Dear Sir, I have just completed the CELTA course in Istanbul, Turkey and want to do the DELTA course in Athens, Greece , hopefully .
  • But before that, I also want to do some other on-line courses on your website which I’ve found very exciting , to be honest .
  • So I am writing to enquire about the short courses.
  • For example I am especially interested in (i) Teaching Performing Arts in English and (ii) Using Technology courses.
  • Could you please give me more information about the content of both of the courses?
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Dear Sir,

I have just completed the CELTA course in Istanbul, Turkey and want to do the DELTA course in Athens, Greece, hopefully. But before that, I also want to do some other on-line courses on your website which I’ve found very exciting, to be honest. So I am writing to enquire about the short courses. For example

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