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Nikitus Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Short composition, 35 words

Dear forum members

I want to ask about a short composition:

The stone resembles a crystal receiving rays from the sun. This produces that the various edges of the asymmetric figure adopt different colors that seem to follow different paths but they finally join to converge.

Context: A boy found a stone in the ground. The stone resembles a crystal

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I want to ask about a short composition: The stone resembles a crystal receiving rays from the sun. This produces that the various edges of the asymmetric figure adopt different colors that seem to follow different paths but they finally join to converge. Context: A boy found a stone in the ground.

  • I want to ask about a short composition: The stone resembles a crystal receiving rays from the sun.
  • This produces that the various edges of the asymmetric figure adopt different colors that seem to follow different paths but they finally join to converge.
  • Context: A boy found a stone in the ground.
  • The stone resembles a crystal The phrase This produces that is incorrect grammar, and seems unnecessary.
  • i suggest eg The stone resembles a crystal receiving rays from the sun.
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I want to ask about a short composition:

The stone resembles a crystal receiving rays from the sun. This produces that the various edges of the asymmetric figure adopt different colors that seem to follow different paths but they finally join to converge.

Context: A boy found a stone in the ground. The stone resembles a crystal

The phrase
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Thank you very much Clive!
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That actually helped me vey much so a special thx to you Clive

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