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Lission Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Short composition
Hi everybody
Could someone please edit the following composition for me? Many thanks in advance.
It was a breezy Monday morning. My classmates and I were having English lesson. Our teacher, Mrs Su, was teaching us how to write a composition.
Suddenly Rani stood up in fright and cried, “Centipede! Centipede! It’s on my schoolbag!” Every classmate of hers was frightened and quickly lifted up their legs. Those who saw the centipede screamed in fear.
Mrs Su instructed the pupils to remain seated and to keep calm. Then she took off one of her high-heeled shoes and hit the centipede repeatedly with it. It struggled for a while before it died.
Mrs Su then swept away the centipede and threw it into the wastepaper basket. After that, lesson resumed. The pupils were now at ease since the centipede was no longer alive.
Could someone please edit the following composition for me? Many thanks in advance.
It was a breezy Monday morning. My classmates and I were having English lesson. Our teacher, Mrs Su, was teaching us how to write a composition.
Suddenly Rani stood up in fright and cried, “Centipede! Centipede! It’s on my schoolbag!” Every classmate of hers was frightened and quickly lifted up their legs. Those who saw the centipede screamed in fear.
Mrs Su instructed the pupils to remain seated and to keep calm. Then she took off one of her high-heeled shoes and hit the centipede repeatedly with it. It struggled for a while before it died.
Mrs Su then swept away the centipede and threw it into the wastepaper basket. After that, lesson resumed. The pupils were now at ease since the centipede was no longer alive.
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Hi Lission Lission Hi everybody Could someone please edit the following composition for me? Many thanks in advance. It was a breezy Monday morning.
- Hi Lission Lission Hi everybody Could someone please edit the following composition for me?
- Many thanks in advance.
- It was a breezy Monday morning.
- My classmates and I were having an English lesson.
- Our teacher, Mrs Su, was teaching us how to write a composition.
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Hi Lission
LissionHi everybody
Could someone please edit the following composition for me? Many thanks in advance.
It was a breezy Monday morning. My classmates and I were having an English lesson. Our teacher, Mrs Su, was teaching us how to write a composition.
Suddenly Rani, one of my classmates, jumped
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Thanks. Grammar Geek, for correcting the composition.
Centipedes are poisonous and can bite if they are touched or accidentally stepped on when you are baredfooted. This is what I've heard about them. So far, fortunately, I have not been bitten by one of them.
Centipedes are poisonous and can bite if they are touched or accidentally stepped on when you are baredfooted. This is what I've heard about them. So far, fortunately, I have not been bitten by one of them.
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