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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

short composition

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00This composition is meant for Year 1 students. Could someone please edit it for me. Thank you in advance.02br
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01b00 00It is raining heavily. Some of the roads are flooded. Wenxu was coming home from school. Luckily, he has brought an umbrella. He walks quickly to the bus stop to wait for the bus. 02b02br
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01b00 00There are many people at the bus stop. Some of them are wet because they have been caught in the rain. Some people are running towards the bus stop.02b02br
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01b00 00Soon the bus Wenxu has been waiting for comes. He gets on the bus.00 00It is crowded. Fortunately, Wen Xu finds a seat. When the bus is near his house, he gets off the bus.00 00He is surprised to see his mother. She tells Wen Xu, “I thought you didn’t bring an umbrella. That’s why I have come here with another umbrella.” Wenxu thanks his mother and they walk home together.02b02br
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0 00It is raining heavily. Some of the roads are flooded. Wenxu 01b 00is going 02b 00home from school.

— Nona the brit

  • 0 00It is raining heavily.
  • Some of the roads are flooded.
  • Wenxu 01b 00is going 02b 00home from school.
  • Luckily, he has brought an umbrella.
  • He walks quickly to the bus stop to wait for the bus.
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0 00It is raining heavily. Some of the roads are flooded. Wenxu 01b00is going 02b00home from school. Luckily, he has brought an umbrella. He walks quickly to the bus stop to wait for the bus. 02br
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00 There are many people at the bus stop. Some of them are wet because they have been caught in the rain. Some people are running towards the bus
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0Hi Nona02br
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00Many thanks for editing the composition.02br
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