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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

short composition

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01b00One sunny day, an old man was walking in the park when he tripped over a stone. Fortunately, a young man was jogging in the park. He quickly ran to help him. He asked whether he was badly injured. The man said that he was all right. He had only a very minor cut on his right knee. The young man was relieved on hearing that. He helped him up and led him to a bench. The young man then applied a piece of medicated plaster over the cut.02b00 02br
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01b00After that, he continued jogging, happy that he had done his best to help the old man.02b0-
  

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0 01blockquote 01cite 10Yoong Liat12cite 10Hi guys12br 12br 10This composition is meant for the 1st-year students. Could someone please edit it for me? 12br 12br 11b 10One sunny day, an old man 10were10 walking in the park 10and accidentally10 tripped over a stone.

  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Yoong Liat12cite 10Hi guys12br 12br 10This composition is meant for the 1st-year students.
  • Could someone please edit it for me?
  • 12br 12br 11b 10One sunny day, an old man 10were10 walking in the park 10and accidentally10 tripped over a stone.
  • Fortunately, a young man was jogging in the park 10as well10.
  • 10After seeing the old man fall10, he quickly ran 10towards him10 10to lend the him some assistance10.
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01cite10Yoong Liat12cite10Hi guys12br
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10This composition is meant for the 1st-year students. Could someone please edit it for me? Thank you very much.12br
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11b10One sunny day, an old man 10were10 walking in the park 10and accidentally10 tripped over a stone. Fortunat

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