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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

short composition

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01b00Could someone please edit this short composition for me. Any suggestions are welcome.Thank you in advance. 02b02br
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00Once a hare challenged a tortoise to a race. “Hey, Slowcoach, shall we have a race?" Although the tortoise was feeling hurt, it kept quiet. The hare continued, “Hey, are you a coward?” The tortoise finally agreed to the race although it knew it would lose.02br
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00They went to the starting point and the hare started the race by shouting, “One, two, three, go.”00 00Off it ran and was soon far away from the tortoise. The hare, seeing that the tortoise was too slow for it, decided to take a nap. 02br
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00The tortoise continued walking slowly but steadily even after it passed the hare. It was near the ending point when the hare woke up and decided to catch up with the tortoise. But it was too late!0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Once a hare challenged a tortoise to a race. " Although the tortoise was hurt, it kept quiet. ” Off it ran and was soon far ahead.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Once a hare challenged a tortoise to a race.
  • " Although the tortoise was hurt, it kept quiet.
  • ” Off it ran and was soon far ahead.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00The tortoise continued walking slowly but steadily, even after it passed the hare.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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0Thanks, Clive, for your constructive comments and the corrections. 0-
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