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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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00 Could someone please edit this short composition for me. Any suggestions to improve the compositon are welcome. Thank you in advance. 02 br
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00 My brother is four years old. He is two years younger than I. 00 00 I like him very much because he is lovable and cute. We often play with each other. Sometimes he will cry when I accidentally hurt him while we are playing. I will say sorry to him and he will stop crying. 00 02 br
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00 00 He and I like sweets and chocolates. We often share our sweets and chocolates. Mother often tells us not to eat too much of sweet things because it is bad for our teeth. She is correct because every time we visit the dentist, he will tell us that he will need to fill up our decayed teeth. 00 02 br
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00 00 We often go out together. We usually go the playground near our house to play on the swings and slides there. We will come home with our clothes dirtied and Mother will scold us. 00 02 br
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00 00 Our parents love us very much. We love them too. 02 br
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00 Could someone please edit this short composition for me. Any suggestions to improve the compositon are welcome. Thank you in advance. 02 br
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00 My brother is four years old. He is two years younger than I. 00 00 I like him very much because he is lovable and cute. We often play with each other. Sometimes he will cry when I accidentally hurt him while we are playing. I will say sorry to him and he will stop crying. 00 02 br
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00 00 He and I like sweets and chocolates. We often share our sweets and chocolates. Mother often tells us not to eat too much of sweet things because it is bad for our teeth. She is correct because every time we visit the dentist, he will tell us that he will need to fill up our decayed teeth. 00 02 br
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00 00 We often go out together. We usually go the playground near our house to play on the swings and slides there. We will come home with our clothes dirtied and Mother will scold us. 00 02 br
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00 00 Our parents love us very much. We love them too. 02 br
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0 Let's start with a few glaring ones: 02 br
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00 Mother often tells us not to eat too 00 much 00 01 font 00 of 02 font 00 sweet things 02 br
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10 Let's start with a few glaring ones: 12 br
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10 Mother often tells us not to eat too 10 much 10 11 font 10 of 12 font 10 sweet things 12 br
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0 I'm no English expert, but let me try: 02 br
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00 My brother is four years old, two years younger than me. I enjoy his company very much and we often go out to play. While we we play, I would accidentally hurt him and he would start crying. I will then tell him that I am sorry that I have hurt him. My little brother will forgive me, stop crying, and we will continue to play
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00 My brother is four years old, two years younger than me. I enjoy his company very much and we often go out to play. While we we play, I would accidentally hurt him and he would start crying. I will then tell him that I am sorry that I have hurt him. My little brother will forgive me, stop crying, and we will continue to play
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