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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
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short composition
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00 Another short composition passage for 1st-year students. Could someone please edit it. Thank you in advance. 02 br
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00 One afternoon, Mike was waiting for a bus when he saw a purse under a seat at the bus stop. He picked up the purse, opened it and saw that there was an identity card and some money in it. At first, he wanted to keep the money, but he later decided that he should take it to the police station. His mother has often advised him not to keep things that do not belong to him. 02 br
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01 b 00 When Mike 00 arrived 00 at the police station, he informed a police officer that he had found a purse. He then showed him the purse. Just then, a young woman stepped into the police station to report that she had lost a purse. The police officer then asked her what her purse looked like. As he was now quite sure that the purse belonged 00 00 to her, he asked her for her name, identity card number and address. 00 00 As what she said was the same as stated in the identity card, the police officer was convinced that she was the owner of the purse. He asked Mike to write a report about his discovery of the purse. She also asked the woman to write a report about the 00 loss 00 of her purse. After that, he returned the purse to the woman, who thanked Mike repeatedly and praised him for his honesty. 02 b 0-
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00 Another short composition passage for 1st-year students. Could someone please edit it. Thank you in advance. 02 br
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00 One afternoon, Mike was waiting for a bus when he saw a purse under a seat at the bus stop. He picked up the purse, opened it and saw that there was an identity card and some money in it. At first, he wanted to keep the money, but he later decided that he should take it to the police station. His mother has often advised him not to keep things that do not belong to him. 02 br
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01 b 00 When Mike 00 arrived 00 at the police station, he informed a police officer that he had found a purse. He then showed him the purse. Just then, a young woman stepped into the police station to report that she had lost a purse. The police officer then asked her what her purse looked like. As he was now quite sure that the purse belonged 00 00 to her, he asked her for her name, identity card number and address. 00 00 As what she said was the same as stated in the identity card, the police officer was convinced that she was the owner of the purse. He asked Mike to write a report about his discovery of the purse. She also asked the woman to write a report about the 00 loss 00 of her purse. After that, he returned the purse to the woman, who thanked Mike repeatedly and praised him for his honesty. 02 b 0-
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02 br 00 Here you go: 02 br 02 br 00 One afternoon, Mike was waiting at the bus stop when he suddenly caught sight of a purse under a seat. He picked it up, opened it, and saw there were an identity card and some money in it. 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 When Mike 00 arrived 00 , he told a police officer what had happened.
- 02 br 00 Here you go: 02 br 02 br 00 One afternoon, Mike was waiting at the bus stop when he suddenly caught sight of a purse under a seat.
- He picked it up, opened it, and saw there were an identity card and some money in it.
- 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 When Mike 00 arrived 00 , he told a police officer what had happened.
- He then proceeded to show the officer the lost property exactly the moment when a young woman came in to report she had lost her purse .
- The officer asked her what her purse looked like.
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0 Hi Yong, 02 br
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00 I have made some alterations. 02 br
00 Here you go: 02 br
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00 One afternoon, Mike was waiting at the bus stop when he suddenly caught sight of a purse under a seat. He picked it up, opened it, and saw there were an identity card and some money in it. At first, he wanted to keep the money, but bearing in mind his mother's adv
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00 I have made some alterations. 02 br
00 Here you go: 02 br
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00 One afternoon, Mike was waiting at the bus stop when he suddenly caught sight of a purse under a seat. He picked it up, opened it, and saw there were an identity card and some money in it. At first, he wanted to keep the money, but bearing in mind his mother's adv
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0 Thanks, Incho. But this composition is meant for 1st-year students. Your amended version seems to be for students who have had six years of education. Do you agree? 0-
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01 cite 10 Yoong Liat 12 cite 10 Thanks, Incho. But this composition is meant for 1st-year students. Your amended version seems to be for students who have had six years of education. Do you agree? 12 blockquote10 I have less than four, Yong. 0-
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0 Less than four? Less than 4 children? Less that 4 years of education? What do you mean? 02 br
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00 I didn't mean to offend you if I did. You've done a great job, but I think 1st-year students will find difficulty understanding the amended version. I would like to make it suitable for their level. 02 br
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00 Once again I would like to thank you for your g
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00 I didn't mean to offend you if I did. You've done a great job, but I think 1st-year students will find difficulty understanding the amended version. I would like to make it suitable for their level. 02 br
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00 Once again I would like to thank you for your g
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