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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
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short composition

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00Another short composition for 1st-year students. Could someone please edit it for me. Thank you in advance.00 02br
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00 My form teacher is Mr Tan. He teaches us English and mathematics. He is tall and strong. He has short hair. He wears a pair of spectacles. 02br
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00 00He is strict during the lessons. That is why all of us pay attention to what he teaches. We are afraid that he will punish us if we are caught not paying attention. He often advises us to study hard so as to do well in the examinations.02br
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00 00When the lesson is almost over, he will ask us if we have any questions to ask. If we have, he will explain to us clearly what we do not know. We like Mr Tan very much. 0-
  

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0 Looks fine to me, Yoong Liat0-

  • 0 Looks fine to me, Yoong Liat0-
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0 Looks fine to me, Yoong Liat0-
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0 Strict check is ON! :-)02br
00Note that I am not a native speaker.01blockquote
01cite10Yoong Liat12cite10 Hi guys,12br
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10Another short composition for 1st-year students. Could someone please edit it for me. Thank you in advance.10 12br
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10 My form teacher is Mr Tan. He teache
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0Hello Selecter02br
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00Thank you for your constructive comments.0-
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0 01font00A small change...00 Examinations02font00 is probably better for writing. 01font00Exams 00is used in spoken english.02br
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01cite10Selecter12cite11font10A small change...10 Examinations12font10 is probably better for writing. 11font10Exams 10is used in spoken english.12br
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10I agree. The word in my composition is 'examinatio
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